Cinder

At first, it's important that I mention your piece of artwork is admirably incredible. The concept you have implemented is agreeably ground-breaking. It is plain to me that you hammered away diligently with your exhaustive scope of powers. The fore-shortening of this artwork is greatly suitable for the symbolism that I expect you are trying to create, but now that I think about it this comment is certainly superfluous. Despite that, I feel that your implementation of contrast could of been a lot better as I expect that it wasn't able to equal the quality found in the rest of the artwork. To complete this critique I would like to say that it has been a thrill to write this evaluation for you and I think it will motivate you to develop your artwork.